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5/08/2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Since a few people wanted to see more from last week's Six Sentence Sunday Hot Text snippet (where our intrepid hero Jeff had just received the question "what are you wearing?" via text and replied "a snowsuit, u?") I continued that scene below. Hot Text is a m/f erotic contemporary I hope to finish and submit to my editor this weekend. Hope you enjoy!

    The pause lasted just long enough he wondered if he’d imagined the whole thing. Then came more bars of the song that would make him smile for the rest of his life.
    Plastic wrap.
    His eyebrows shot up. A full roll or partial?
    U r easy, aren’t you?

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13 comments:

Elisa Dane said...

Hahaha! I love it!!

Carolyn Rosewood said...

Nice one!

KarennaC said...

Hmm... I want to find out what's going on here!

Kary said...

This makes me so sorry I missed last weeks six. Great job. I think I'll go take a look at your blog history.

Marie Dees said...

Plastic wrap - great six

Taryn Kincaid said...

This is hilarious! Love the texting!

Lindsay said...

Love it. And the concept of using texting as dialogue is wonderful

Sandy Nachlinger said...

Oh, this is too cool... or hot, depending on how you look at it! I love it.

Unknown said...

Missed last weeks, but this is great!

Laura Kaye said...

LOVE this premise! Great 6!

Shelley Munro said...

LOL - I like the sound of this one. Happy writing.

Roberta Walker said...

Love the sexy banter!

Jayel Kaye said...

The whole texting is great and plastic wrap? ROFL