It's that time again for Six Sentence Sunday! This week, think I'll share six sentences from my current m/f contemporary erotic novella, Conquered. This one's almost finished!
Guys gyrating in the half-nude were not what Emma considered a crucial ingredient for a fun night—unless they were giving a private, horizontal show. But a line of them parading about in their banana hammocks? It didn’t turn her on. In fact, it was downright degrading. And seedy.
And holy crap, who was he?
19 comments:
Hee! I like that she's found someone interesting, even though she doesn't like the show.
LOL... yes, who is he? Clearly he's caught her attention. I like the word choices here: you've characterized her as a woman who's more judgmental than she'd like to think herself, somebody who thinks she's relaxed but really still needs to let loose. Is that what you were going for? Because it's exceptional characterization, I think. Unusual and interesting.
Woot! Sounds as if she might change her mind. :) Great snippet.
I want to know who he is? Is he in the line or someone who walked in?
LOL! Perhaps he's the one to give her the private, horizontal show? :^)
love the term banana hammocks
and generally I agree with her
Enjoyed the internal dialog. I want to know what she sees!
Nice Visual! Loved it... And yeah who is he! I want to know! Great 6
OMG! I love that last line
Great insight into her character and that last line is awesome.
Oh, I love it. She has her mind all made up and then BAM!
It's all degrading until you see something you like, heh.
Great six, and I love your blog layout - so sexy!
Great six Cari! :) Loved the last line.
Nice hook there at the end!
I don't know... I do hope you'll tell. :o)
I love it! I soooo want to read more!
Yeah, holy banana hammocks, batman! Who IS that man? Love that six.
Love it. Sounds good, Cari :)
Yeah, I'm not one for strip clubs either. But seriously... who is he?
~ Renee
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