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4/17/2011

Six Sentence Sunday (Easter blog hop still going on as well!)

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It's that time again for Six Sentence Sunday! This week, think I'll share six sentences from my current m/f contemporary erotic novella, Conquered. This one's almost finished!

Guys gyrating in the half-nude were not what Emma considered a crucial ingredient for a fun night—unless they were giving a private, horizontal show. But a line of them parading about in their banana hammocks? It didn’t turn her on. In fact, it was downright degrading. And seedy. 

And holy crap, who was he?

19 comments:

ada-hoffmann said...

Hee! I like that she's found someone interesting, even though she doesn't like the show.

Vivien Jackson said...

LOL... yes, who is he? Clearly he's caught her attention. I like the word choices here: you've characterized her as a woman who's more judgmental than she'd like to think herself, somebody who thinks she's relaxed but really still needs to let loose. Is that what you were going for? Because it's exceptional characterization, I think. Unusual and interesting.

Cate Masters said...

Woot! Sounds as if she might change her mind. :) Great snippet.

graylinfox said...

I want to know who he is? Is he in the line or someone who walked in?

Sarah Grimm said...

LOL! Perhaps he's the one to give her the private, horizontal show? :^)

sue said...

love the term banana hammocks
and generally I agree with her

Cara Bristol said...

Enjoyed the internal dialog. I want to know what she sees!

Tigris Eden said...

Nice Visual! Loved it... And yeah who is he! I want to know! Great 6

Rebecca Royce said...

OMG! I love that last line

Eleri Stone said...

Great insight into her character and that last line is awesome.

Jenna McCormick said...

Oh, I love it. She has her mind all made up and then BAM!

Misa said...

It's all degrading until you see something you like, heh.

Great six, and I love your blog layout - so sexy!

Shelly said...

Great six Cari! :) Loved the last line.

Susanna Fraser said...

Nice hook there at the end!

Liana Brooks said...

I don't know... I do hope you'll tell. :o)

Shaina said...

I love it! I soooo want to read more!

J.Rose Allister said...

Yeah, holy banana hammocks, batman! Who IS that man? Love that six.

Shelley Munro said...

Love it. Sounds good, Cari :)

Zenobia Renquist said...

Yeah, I'm not one for strip clubs either. But seriously... who is he?

~ Renee