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7/24/2011

Six Sentence Sunday...Provoke Me style, Part Six


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Now to Six Sentence Sunday... In last week's scene, our intrepid hero, Spencer, was spotted at Kink by Kelly, his employee. Stuff ensues. ;)


Awareness hummed between them. His hooded gaze raked her bare, left her shivering and raw.

Exposed.

It was all too much. She’d come here to be with him when she couldn’t even face herself in this place. Kelly couldn’t take those few steps toward him, but she couldn’t turn away.


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19 comments:

Graylin Fox said...

Got her stuck to her place. I want to know what happens next. The "stuff ensues" part.

Jean said...

Caught in a dilemma! Excellent tension. So what does she do? Great six.

Jayel Kaye said...

enjoyed the tension and the 6

Debra Moore said...

"Kelly couldn’t take those few steps toward him, but she couldn’t turn away." Nicely done! Love this sentence!

Alix said...

raked her bare - fantastic!

Sherry Gloag said...

Leaves lot's of questions for the reader. Great six.

Bree said...

Great tension in this scene. Will she or won't she?

Carrie Ann Ryan said...

What happens next? Great Six!

Lex Valentine said...

I love it when men intrigue you to the point that you ignore your fears. Great six!

wearegoingonawitchhunt said...

I loved that bit 'awareness hummed between them' I could feel the tension!

Lindsay said...

Love the internal dilemma she has at the end

Angela S. Stone said...

Oh! Great tension!!!

Gem Sivad said...

Can't pretend it didn't happen so she's going to have to make a move...fast. :) Great six!

Dee Carney said...

Love her vulnerable he makes her feel.

Sandy Nachlinger said...

What's a nice girl like you doing in a place like this?? Sounds like Kelly is going to have to answer that question, and soon. Good six sentences with lots of tension.

Sonya Clark said...

I like how much you reveal about Kelly with the line "She’d come here to be with him when she couldn’t even face herself in this place." Great six!

Laura Kaye said...

Like that last sentence--full of tension. Someone's warring between competing needs and desires!

Ju Dimello said...

hawt, hawt, hawt!!!!! ;)

Lovely snippet, Cari!

Lucy Felthouse said...

Sounds fab - and I love the title of the book :)