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Now to Six Sentence Sunday... In last week's scene, our intrepid hero, Spencer, was spotted at Kink by Kelly, his employee. Stuff ensues. ;)
Awareness hummed between them. His hooded gaze raked her bare,
left her shivering and raw.
Exposed.
It was all too much. She’d come here to be with him when she
couldn’t even face herself in this place. Kelly couldn’t take those few steps
toward him, but she couldn’t turn away.
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19 comments:
Got her stuck to her place. I want to know what happens next. The "stuff ensues" part.
Caught in a dilemma! Excellent tension. So what does she do? Great six.
enjoyed the tension and the 6
"Kelly couldn’t take those few steps toward him, but she couldn’t turn away." Nicely done! Love this sentence!
raked her bare - fantastic!
Leaves lot's of questions for the reader. Great six.
Great tension in this scene. Will she or won't she?
What happens next? Great Six!
I love it when men intrigue you to the point that you ignore your fears. Great six!
I loved that bit 'awareness hummed between them' I could feel the tension!
Love the internal dilemma she has at the end
Oh! Great tension!!!
Can't pretend it didn't happen so she's going to have to make a move...fast. :) Great six!
Love her vulnerable he makes her feel.
What's a nice girl like you doing in a place like this?? Sounds like Kelly is going to have to answer that question, and soon. Good six sentences with lots of tension.
I like how much you reveal about Kelly with the line "She’d come here to be with him when she couldn’t even face herself in this place." Great six!
Like that last sentence--full of tension. Someone's warring between competing needs and desires!
hawt, hawt, hawt!!!!! ;)
Lovely snippet, Cari!
Sounds fab - and I love the title of the book :)
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