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4/22/2012

Six Sentence Sunday, Virgin Territory part 1

Yay for Six Sentence Sunday! This is my first Six Sentence Sunday from VIRGIN TERRITORY, my most recent release that came out 4/13 from Decadent Publishing. In this scene, Vincent is trying to convince Kiki to go out with him. He's a very persuasive sort. ;) Hope you enjoy!


After what had to be the longest pause in conversational history, Kiki blew out a breath. “I guess you heard me say I haven’t had a date in…a while.”

“Three years isn’t a while, Vincent said, clearing his throat as she tucked some napkins into his chili dog tray. See, she cared - she wanted to ensure he had a tidy meal. “I thought you might appreciate some companionship, as would I,” he added.

Would he ever.


Check out VIRGIN TERRITORY's buy link and excerpt at Decadent Publishing HERE (also available at Amazon and ARe with B&N coming soon!)

Find more Six Sentence Sunday goodness HERE

10 comments:

Jessica Subject said...

Love it! So cute, yet tense at the same time. :)

Tonya Burrows said...

Haha, love it! Vincent has such a great voice. And I love the first line.

Donna Cummings said...

I love his interpretation of "caring". This sounds like a great story. :)

Tina said...

Fabulous! I just love your writing. It's so real and vivid.
Great job, Cari! :)

Alix Cameron said...

I love your style, and ability to bring me right into the scene. great six!

angelaquarles.com said...

Love this 6, especially the napkin part (I know, I'm weird, but it was such a nice cute thing for him to notice and assign meaning to). Anyway, you captured a really great moment here...

A.S. Fenichel said...

Vincent is adorable. Nice six!

Veronica Scott said...

Like the detail with the napkins! Great six!

Laura Kaye said...

Love that first line! Congrats on another new release--you're on fire! :)

Joya said...

Great six! Made me crave a chili dog. Thanks for sharing. :)